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chrispin_
Jan 26, 2013chrispin_ rated this title 0.5 out of 5 stars
I liked the intro. the army background of the main character was an interesting way to add an explanation for her combat skills, but the story was just a re-tread of the evil corporation/government/evil entity doing evil things. Not interesting at all. The characters have no agency, they just react to all the evil things the evil people do. Why do the evil people do these things? Because they're evil. There were many signs of lazy writing: weird phrasing such as "she went out like a light being turned off"; anacronysms such as when someone had plane tickets in their pocket; and characters doing out of character things to unnecessarily convolute the plot. Awful.